peer feedback

A student on our course called Alice Salad gave me some feedback on how to improve my blog.

My blog;
 you need to explain WHY you have chosen to do human figures. cant be just because you like it. really think about why :)
sort your artist research out, make it more clear and take that massive list of artists off cus it makes it difficult to read and boring. make a quick list of media you want to use, ideas of final piece. your blogs a bit messy atm. and only put on things that are relevant otherwise its gunna be harder for you to think of ideas. xxxxx

for artist research dont copy things off internet unless you have read the info and its relevent. explain why you like the artist and how it relates to you and your work. the examiner and tutors already know about the artists background. if youre gunna get info off internet only put what media they use, the explanation- i.e what the art work is about and how they thought of it/got there. watch videos and documentaries about the artist and it will help you to understand more and give you ideas. i watched 2 documentaries this week and they have helped me and given me ideas about my own work and the meaning behind it :) ..i sound like a teacher haha! hope this helps. and this is my fmp blog: http://alicesagarfmp.blogspot.co.uk/ xxx

An Idea:
why dont you take photographs of people and their movement, then strip it down to one line drawing that looks interesting enough and then create a wire sculpture of the drawing? :) x



 So from this feedback i am going to change my blog as it doesnt show much understanding, or research its just poor. I am going to view other people blogs for an idea on what i need to do on my blog to improve it:
alicesagarfmp.blogspot.co.uk
srhsmth@tumblr.com
jesseyelouise.blogspot.co.uk
foziaiqbal2.blogspot.co.uk
Here are screenshots of before I changed my blog, as it shows it to be very poor;